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Re: The Seed of Spite
Hey, Nickelodeon! Jcobseed's right- write whatever you want, but make sure you're learning from it, as well. Take the time to work on plot and characters, and if you finish ...
May 30, 2007 -
Re: The Something Beneath the Stairs, No. 1
scrambled_pages: Ooh, cool! That's grand- I didn't even realize I was doing that. Hmm. I fixed the sentence, as per request- though I changed the second 'made' to 'paid'. Rhymes, ...
May 30, 2007 -
Re: Character Answer Game
They should lovingly refer to me as Most Dear and Honorable Lieutenant, but I've been called worse. I'm wanted by the Virginian Government, for example...they call me a "Demonic Rascal ...
May 29, 2007 -
Re: Horrors of Lecraesa
"The Last Stricken Eszrov"...I love the word 'stricken'. "Beautiful Shame" is an excellent one, as well. :D Ooh, ood luck. Characters with fun pasts are the best for write for, ...
May 29, 2007 -
Re: Character Answer Game
Princess Mary Elizabeth...ah, go look her up. I've never met her. - Luke A pseudo-Franc who's afraid of her husband. Really, I pity her- she's really a nice person, but ...
May 28, 2007 -
Re: Character Answer Game
Princess Mary Elizabeth...ah, go look her up. I've never met her. - Luke A pseudo-Franc who's afraid of her husband. Really, I pity her- she's really a nice person, but ...
May 28, 2007 -
Re: Character Answer Game
Specific people, of course...the ladies at my grandmother's tea, certainly not. Luke? Certainly yes. - Adelais I don't say anything, and people laugh at me. I suppose I'm just naturally ...
May 28, 2007 -
Re: The Something Beneath the Stairs, No. 1
Thanks, Roy and JC! It's not going to be a short story...I don't think. I'm going to edit this section further and play around with the plot cards for a ...
May 27, 2007 -
Re: How Often Do You Critique?
I'm kind of moody in that regard- I critiqued something about once every week (or every two weeks) for quite awhile- but then in these past few days I've been ...
May 27, 2007 -
Re: Necropolis
"What kind of pancake do you want, Lionel?" Lionel was coloring the jolly pancake portrayed in his IHOP coloring book, slowly drawing in swirls of color round its diameter. He ...
May 27, 2007 -
Re: I will Remember
Hey, JCobseed! Don’t look down. It’s a long fall. I’m not afraid of heights so much as the fall that each one ensures. Ah, an absolutely beautiful line. It's true, ...
May 27, 2007 -
Re: The Something Beneath the Stairs, No. 1
Thanks, guys! I went back and fixed all the typos- I should really, really not try to write anything before ten in the morning. It just doesn't seem as coherent... ...
May 27, 2007 -
Re: that Ivy
Hey, Meevs! This is cool- writing prompts inspire great ideas, huh? This was very short, so I've only got two things to ramble about: SENTENCE VARIETY: I ramble on a ...
May 27, 2007 -
Re: The Something Beneath the Stairs, No. 1
From The Desk of Ezra Must, Attorney at Law To: Mr. Jacob Whippleton 86 Bank Street, Boston (Direct messenger to Office With the Yellow Door.) January 14, 1843 Dearest Friend, ...
May 26, 2007 -
Re: Twilight by Stephenie Meyer
Augh, see, I don't like it very much...granted, I'm on page 250, but here's why. - Bella is totally a Mary Sue. Meyer describes a beautiful character- black hair, milk ...
May 26, 2007
