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Sally37Z

  • Short Story » Science Fiction, Humor Re: When time glitches

    That was a really good story. I was really interested and wanted to keep reading. One thing you could of done was put a plot twist in the end to ...

    Nov 11, 2018
  • Short Story » Narrative, Realistic Re: Eyes On You

    It was a really good story. The only thing were spelling but I can’t complain about tha cos I’m not the best ether. I want More of that I just ...

    Nov 10, 2018
  • Short Story » Narrative, Realistic Re: Eyes On You

    It was a really good story. The only thing were spelling but I can’t complain about tha cos I’m not the best ether. I want More of that I just ...

    Nov 9, 2018
  • Short Story » Supernatural, General Re: Ghosted (Draft - Part 1 of story?)

    It is really good but I don’t get the start

    Nov 8, 2018
  • Short Story » Supernatural, General Re: Ghosted (Draft - Part 1 of story?)

    It is really good but I don’t get the start

    Nov 8, 2018
  • Short Story » Supernatural, General Re: Ghosted (Draft - Part 1 of story?)

    I don’t really get the start but other then that it was really good and I can’t wait to read the next part

    Nov 8, 2018


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