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Re: I Love You
Love it. Absolutely love it. Plus the acrostic form that you have everything in. The part 'thorns that inxtoicate me with' sounds kind of odd, it might be better if ...
Sep 1, 2008 -
Re: Does He See?
Lots of people wonder about what you're wondering in that theme. Whatever you're struggling through, you're not alone. I like the repetition of 'Lord oh Lord', and how you have ...
Aug 31, 2008 -
Re: Peepholes from heaven
I want to say that your poem is so true. God shines His Light on both good and bad people. Next, I agree with some of the people up there: ...
Aug 31, 2008
