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This makes me curious to what kind of topic you're writing about. It definitely sounds like a tragedy. But what does "Lite the torches" connote in meaning to you ? ...

Whoops. Ipod. xP Thanks for letting me know that~ I used to be a writer of 'really' sad and serious poems, but not anymore. I'm trying to stay away from ...

Wonderful to hear that you've found faith in Him :). I'd have to disagree with some of the people above. This poem is based firmly on faith--those who have not ...

No offence taken :). Maybe I would change it if it was another poem, that had a more serious mood. I could understand you on that. But this poem was ...

I'm sorry. But I think you may be looking at this a little too deeply ;o. This was only intended to be a light, humorous poem. The narrator is a ...

Stepping onto cloud nine, Basking in the sunshine, Dancing by the light of the moon, Singing a melodious tune, Running through a field of grass, Swimming through a sea so ...

Very different and unique. Gives you a kind of different look on the 'chic' trend of nightclubbing. I like some of the phrases, like 'the evening’s vain festivities now done', ...

@ Max: Late is just as good (except homework) ;P. Wow this site is really friendly... I'm used to big forums, like Gaia and that Lotr forum I used to ...

I like how you put 'reach the city in the sky, welcome to your new home'. What I don't like is the general execution of the big picture. I mean, ...

Yeah--I kinda need to decide that beforehand, lol. Haha, France and corsettes do go together though, so I see where you go with that ;P. To be honest, I'm extremely ...

Love it. Absolutely love it. Plus the acrostic form that you have everything in. The part 'thorns that inxtoicate me with' sounds kind of odd, it might be better if ...

Lots of people wonder about what you're wondering in that theme. Whatever you're struggling through, you're not alone. I like the repetition of 'Lord oh Lord', and how you have ...

I want to say that your poem is so true. God shines His Light on both good and bad people. Next, I agree with some of the people up there: ...

@ Casey: Heheh, thanks. I'll be sure to check that then. @ Merry: Thanks~ I'm more of a fanfiction writer though. I have some short stories I've written for school, ...

Sooo... an aquaintence of mine talked about this site, and I became interested. Then I googled this site (google is your friend), found out about it, and joined. I write ...