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Re: The Lie that Saved the World Chapter 8: Old Wounds
Hello, hello! Salis here with a review!! There aren't any questions from you at the end of this one, but that needn't worry you one bit. I've got plenty of ...
Dec 6, 2022 -
Re: The Lie that Saved the World: Chapter 0, the end.
Hey! Salis here with a review!! Sorry it took me so long to write one for the prologue's end, but these last two weeks at work have been nightmarish to ...
Nov 24, 2022 -
Re: The Ten-Year-Old Necromancer: Chapter Seven
Hey!! Salis here with a review! I haven't read any previous chapters from this story, so I'll comment solely on what I read here. First of all I'd like to ...
Nov 2, 2022 -
Re: The Lie that Saved the World: Chapter 0, part 5
Hey! Salis here with a review!! Starting with your questions, Max's behavior really surprised me in this chapter compared to what I've seen from him so far! That's why it ...
Sep 10, 2022 -
Re: The Lie that Saved the World: Chapter 0, part 4
Hello, hello! Salis here with a review! First off, I want to say it's great to have you back! And don't worry about how active you are here. Everyone's got ...
Aug 28, 2022 -
Re: The Quest for Fire - Into the Mists - Chapter 45
Hey! Salis here with a review! I love how although Zoltar only waits for Emerald throughout most of this chapter, you've created such a feeling of tension that the story ...
Aug 5, 2022 -
Re: The Lie that Saved the World: Chapter 0, part 3
Hello, hello! Salis here with a review!! In this case your questions perfectly align with what I wanted to talk about, so I'll get right to it. In the case ...
Aug 1, 2022 -
Re: Awakening: Epilogue
Hello again! Salis here with a review for the final part (so far) of your story!! The banter between Blake and June never gets old! Considering everything they've been through, ...
Jul 22, 2022 -
Re: Awakening Chapter 25: Recovery
Hey! Salis here with another review! First of all, I want to apologize for taking so long to get to this chapter. Apart from some trouble at work, I started ...
Jul 21, 2022 -
Re: The Lie that Saved the World: Chapter 0, part 2
Hey there! I'm back with a review for the second half of this chapter!! I think you've done a great job with explaining the purpose of Secronium! If this had ...
Jul 1, 2022 -
Re: The Lie that Saved the World Chapter 0, part 1
Hey!! Salis here with a review! As usual, I'll start by answering the questions you've left after the chapter. Initially I was left with the feeling that Ethan was haunted ...
Jun 28, 2022 -
Re: Awakening Chapter 24: Puzzle
Hey!! Salis here with another (although quite a late one) review! I'll admit, you had me going at the beginning. Given all the wounds he suffered, I actually believed that ...
Jun 21, 2022 -
Re: Awakening Chapter 23: Outcome
Hi! Salis here with a review!! Well, this fight ended very suddenly. I get that Blake was barely conscious at this point and responded purely driven by his will when ...
Jun 11, 2022 -
Re: Awakening Chapter 22: Power
Hi! Salis here catching up with another review!! I actually thought Blake might get a chance to stand on at least even ground against Puter after last chapter's revelations, but ...
Jun 7, 2022 -
Re: Awakening Chapter 21: Immunity
Hey! Salis here with another review!! I'd like to apologize for reading this chapter so late and I know there are a few more chapters to catch up on, but ...
Jun 6, 2022
