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  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Action / Adventure Re: The Lie that Saved the World Chapter 8: Old Wounds

    Hello, hello! Salis here with a review!! There aren't any questions from you at the end of this one, but that needn't worry you one bit. I've got plenty of ...

    Dec 6, 2022
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Science Fiction Re: The Lie that Saved the World: Chapter 0, the end.

    Hey! Salis here with a review!! Sorry it took me so long to write one for the prologue's end, but these last two weeks at work have been nightmarish to ...

    Nov 24, 2022
  • Novel / Chapter » Humor, Horror Re: The Ten-Year-Old Necromancer: Chapter Seven

    Hey!! Salis here with a review! I haven't read any previous chapters from this story, so I'll comment solely on what I read here. First of all I'd like to ...

    Nov 2, 2022
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Action / Adventure Re: The Lie that Saved the World: Chapter 0, part 5

    Hey! Salis here with a review!! Starting with your questions, Max's behavior really surprised me in this chapter compared to what I've seen from him so far! That's why it ...

    Sep 10, 2022
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Science Fiction Re: The Lie that Saved the World: Chapter 0, part 4

    Hello, hello! Salis here with a review! First off, I want to say it's great to have you back! And don't worry about how active you are here. Everyone's got ...

    Aug 28, 2022
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: The Quest for Fire - Into the Mists - Chapter 45

    Hey! Salis here with a review! I love how although Zoltar only waits for Emerald throughout most of this chapter, you've created such a feeling of tension that the story ...

    Aug 5, 2022
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Action / Adventure Re: The Lie that Saved the World: Chapter 0, part 3

    Hello, hello! Salis here with a review!! In this case your questions perfectly align with what I wanted to talk about, so I'll get right to it. In the case ...

    Aug 1, 2022
  • Novel / Chapter » Supernatural, General Re: Awakening: Epilogue

    Hello again! Salis here with a review for the final part (so far) of your story!! The banter between Blake and June never gets old! Considering everything they've been through, ...

    Jul 22, 2022
  • Novel / Chapter » Supernatural, General Re: Awakening Chapter 25: Recovery

    Hey! Salis here with another review! First of all, I want to apologize for taking so long to get to this chapter. Apart from some trouble at work, I started ...

    Jul 21, 2022
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Action / Adventure Re: The Lie that Saved the World: Chapter 0, part 2

    Hey there! I'm back with a review for the second half of this chapter!! I think you've done a great job with explaining the purpose of Secronium! If this had ...

    Jul 1, 2022
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Action / Adventure Re: The Lie that Saved the World Chapter 0, part 1

    Hey!! Salis here with a review! As usual, I'll start by answering the questions you've left after the chapter. Initially I was left with the feeling that Ethan was haunted ...

    Jun 28, 2022
  • Novel / Chapter » Supernatural, General Re: Awakening Chapter 24: Puzzle

    Hey!! Salis here with another (although quite a late one) review! I'll admit, you had me going at the beginning. Given all the wounds he suffered, I actually believed that ...

    Jun 21, 2022
  • Novel / Chapter » Supernatural, General Re: Awakening Chapter 23: Outcome

    Hi! Salis here with a review!! Well, this fight ended very suddenly. I get that Blake was barely conscious at this point and responded purely driven by his will when ...

    Jun 11, 2022
  • Novel / Chapter » Supernatural, General Re: Awakening Chapter 22: Power

    Hi! Salis here catching up with another review!! I actually thought Blake might get a chance to stand on at least even ground against Puter after last chapter's revelations, but ...

    Jun 7, 2022
  • Novel / Chapter » Supernatural, General Re: Awakening Chapter 21: Immunity

    Hey! Salis here with another review!! I'd like to apologize for reading this chapter so late and I know there are a few more chapters to catch up on, but ...

    Jun 6, 2022


You never really know how much of you takes residence in other people... We all exchange bits and pieces of ourselves with each other until we're big sparkly collages of everyone and everything we've ever loved
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