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Re: Hate Me
It's very cute! Witty too ha. I like :)
Feb 9, 2011 -
Re: A World Of Changes
I am perfect and I am me, This is how I'm meant to be, Power, fame and money, tearing the world apart, The mirrors are lying and stealing all our ...
Feb 6, 2011 -
Re: Kiss Me, before I Die
Hey! Firstly, I would like to say nice job on this. It's a very original idea and you portrayed it very well without turning it into a major cliche, which ...
Feb 6, 2011 -
Re: Thats What They Say
Wow! That was incredible! You're so young and you can write like that! Firstly, I would just like to say that i really loved this. I loved the deep message ...
Feb 6, 2011 -
Re: My Soul To Take
I think I know, And I think they're right. I think my soul has taken flight. I think I love him, I'ts been a year, I'm wondering why I'm still ...
Dec 8, 2010 -
Re: Some Imagery?
Hey, need help for an English short story about a snowball fight in school haha. I need imagery if you could help that'd be cool thanks :P Some similes and ...
Dec 3, 2010 -
Re: What happened? I don't want to talk about it.
Oh my god! That was so good! You must write the next part! I'm hooked already! So, the only thing I noticed was the repitition of saying you were mad ...
Dec 1, 2010 -
Re: Realized
Heya, Love :) Great piece! Errors: Just the one! The only thing I really found wrong was the underlining. The short sentenses add enough emphasis so you don't really need ...
Nov 30, 2010 -
Re: A Depressed God
I wrote this in fit of anger, but found it quite depressing. Anyway here it is. ****** A statue stands high as can be, outshining stars, and comets as far ...
Nov 29, 2010 -
Re: Twilight
I did this when I was about twelve. I know the picture is not very good, it was taken from my wall at a bad angle ha ha.
Nov 29, 2010 -
Re: Winter
Icey, silver glitters of frost, They fall, they cover us as we walk, They hit me in cold, hard spheres, They fall to earth as frozen tears, White and shiney ...
Nov 29, 2010 -
Re: Our Time
WHOA! I love it! You and I have a very similar style actually. This reminds me of something I would write. Good job! LOL! But seriously, the last line was ...
Nov 29, 2010 -
Re: Glittering Frost
Icey, silver glitters of frost, They fall, they cover us as we walk, They hit me in cold, wet, hard spheres, They fall to the earth as frozen tears, White ...
Nov 29, 2010 -
Re: Misguided Ghosts ♥
Thanks for the review guys, and to the first review there, thanks, but it's just kinda my style =] I wanted it long and choppy. :D But thanks for the ...
Nov 29, 2010 -
Re: Misguided Ghosts ♥
So run, from them, from them. Full speed ahead, you are not useless we are just, misguided ghosts. Travelling endlessly, don't need no ropes. Infact, they follow me, they echoe ...
Nov 23, 2010
