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  • Lyric Poetry Re: Hate Me

    It's very cute! Witty too ha. I like :)

    Feb 9, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: A World Of Changes

    I am perfect and I am me, This is how I'm meant to be, Power, fame and money, tearing the world apart, The mirrors are lying and stealing all our ...

    Feb 6, 2011
  • Romantic Short Stories Re: Kiss Me, before I Die

    Hey! Firstly, I would like to say nice job on this. It's a very original idea and you portrayed it very well without turning it into a major cliche, which ...

    Feb 6, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Thats What They Say

    Wow! That was incredible! You're so young and you can write like that! Firstly, I would just like to say that i really loved this. I loved the deep message ...

    Feb 6, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: My Soul To Take

    I think I know, And I think they're right. I think my soul has taken flight. I think I love him, I'ts been a year, I'm wondering why I'm still ...

    Dec 8, 2010
  • Writers Corner Re: Some Imagery?

    Hey, need help for an English short story about a snowball fight in school haha. I need imagery if you could help that'd be cool thanks :P Some similes and ...

    Dec 3, 2010
  • Romantic Short Stories Re: What happened? I don't want to talk about it.

    Oh my god! That was so good! You must write the next part! I'm hooked already! So, the only thing I noticed was the repitition of saying you were mad ...

    Dec 1, 2010
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Realized

    Heya, Love :) Great piece! Errors: Just the one! The only thing I really found wrong was the underlining. The short sentenses add enough emphasis so you don't really need ...

    Nov 30, 2010
  • Narrative Poetry Re: A Depressed God

    I wrote this in fit of anger, but found it quite depressing. Anyway here it is. ****** A statue stands high as can be, outshining stars, and comets as far ...

    Nov 29, 2010
  • Art & Photography Re: Twilight

    I did this when I was about twelve. I know the picture is not very good, it was taken from my wall at a bad angle ha ha.

    Nov 29, 2010
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Winter

    Icey, silver glitters of frost, They fall, they cover us as we walk, They hit me in cold, hard spheres, They fall to earth as frozen tears, White and shiney ...

    Nov 29, 2010
  • Other Poetry Re: Our Time

    WHOA! I love it! You and I have a very similar style actually. This reminds me of something I would write. Good job! LOL! But seriously, the last line was ...

    Nov 29, 2010
  • Other Poetry Re: Glittering Frost

    Icey, silver glitters of frost, They fall, they cover us as we walk, They hit me in cold, wet, hard spheres, They fall to the earth as frozen tears, White ...

    Nov 29, 2010
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Misguided Ghosts ♥

    Thanks for the review guys, and to the first review there, thanks, but it's just kinda my style =] I wanted it long and choppy. :D But thanks for the ...

    Nov 29, 2010
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Misguided Ghosts ♥

    So run, from them, from them. Full speed ahead, you are not useless we are just, misguided ghosts. Travelling endlessly, don't need no ropes. Infact, they follow me, they echoe ...

    Nov 23, 2010


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