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Re: My Stupid Teenage Essence
OK, I just wrote this. It's about being...well, me! It's just something simple and lacking in smart words, but I hope you like it! Here: Fear is what keeps me ...
Mar 21, 2011 -
Re: Son of the moon
OH MY GOSH! This is amazing work, I really enjoyed it! I felt that the rhythm was generally good, but with one or two errors. Oh well, nobody is perfect. ...
Mar 7, 2011 -
Re: Abducted
Wow! This was really amazing. You are a very talented writer, well done. I especially loved the last couple of lines. I felt they gave that big 'bang!' ending, which ...
Mar 7, 2011 -
Re: Somewhere Over The Rooftop.
I wrote this when I was told to make a decision about leaving home. Two paths cross my heart, And I don't know which to choose. I could win, I ...
Mar 7, 2011 -
Re: Just Can't Get Enough
Hey, just finished Just Can't Get Enough. If you like you can check it out, but it's okay if you don't. :)
Mar 1, 2011 -
Re: Just Can't Get Enough
Hey! Just thought I would inform you all that this is a one shot. :) I stood on the street, right outside of school. The sun was belting down on ...
Mar 1, 2011 -
Re: Paper Hearts And Bagels Pt2
Awh! :) I just love this. It's such a pretty piece, and its so sweet and cute. Please write more? =] I'd love you if you did :D ha. This ...
Feb 28, 2011 -
Re: Clueless
Hey! This was so neat! I really liked it. I love the character of Imo, she seems pretty awesome. She comes across as confident and original. Nice. Dougie seems pretty ...
Feb 27, 2011 -
Re: Peer Pressure
I love this! I'm like, hooked! You so need to write more of this! Can you please write me when you put up more? Ah I just love it. It's ...
Feb 27, 2011 -
Re: Dream
Wow! Very...unexpected ending! LOL! It was good though. It started off very pretty and, well, cliche. But, lucky for you, you managed to save it with that ending. I loved ...
Feb 27, 2011 -
Re: Paralyzing Shortcomings
Awh I love that! It's so inspirational and speaks for its self I guess. I won't lie, when I read the title I though it was going to be a ...
Feb 22, 2011 -
Re: Hatesome With The Fire Of a Thousand Suns.
If there was never a word that I could offer, There was not enough hatred, Not enough venom to descrive such a person. I'll throw you not one raindrop, If ...
Feb 18, 2011 -
Re: Black Lake
Okay, so clearly this is a metaphor. I thought maybe it would be easier to judge if you knew what that metaphor was. It's a metaphor of a person who ...
Feb 16, 2011 -
Re: If I ever,
Wow I really loved this. =] It's like, love and heartbreak all in one! Great job! I like your style, let me know if you ever need a review. I ...
Feb 11, 2011 -
Re: Black And White Photography
Oh my god. You are an amazing photagrapher. Gifted, I see. I'm actually in envy. :P I especially love the first one, the second and third aren't really my type. ...
Feb 10, 2011
