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This was really good! The repetition really ephasised it. Great imagery, rhythm was pretty good too. Very nice piece you've written! Well done.

Top to bottom, inside out, Gold, bronzed skin, and lipsticked mouth. Who are you, I cannot see, What this fakeness of heart, is meant to be. Are you underneath, the ...

Just another light-hearted little poem. Wrote this today after an incident. Hope you enjoy! Trust is when a house is a home, And when it is broken you're left all ...

I really liked this. It was sort of sweet with a hint of angst? A good combination of love and hurt, blended well together. You misspelled 'soo' at the end ...

Awh! I thought this was really neat. Perfect for a one shot. Loved the rhetorical question at the end. The whole vibe of that in general, sweet. Very good. I'd ...

Wow very emotional. it had a good sense of heartbreak and rejection. I just had an issue with the rhythm is all. It wasn't regular, the rhyming didn't seem forced ...

Wow this was really great! I really loved the idea. Also, the detail was fantastic! Perfect imagery. Very original and well written piece. Good job.

hey! I wrote this just yesterday. It's not hard to guess what it's about (but for those who can't guess, it's about bad mother -daughter relationships and broken homes that ...

OMG! When are you going to write more? Can you PM me when you post the next part please! Great story!

This is truely amazing. It's very honest and has great heart put into it, that I can tell. I really felt the emotion behind it and I am guessing it ...

I think you can all unserstand what this is about...:) Ladies and gentleman, I welcome you to the show, You are about to witness the greatest act you'll ever know. ...

I really like this! This is amazing! I like your style. It was a nice rhythm going to it, and it seemed a very sweet poem containing a lot of ...

This poem is a metaphor for growing up living in the shadows. Maybe of a sibling or something. There are a few metaphors like this throughout the poem, speaking in ...

Oh I love it! It's adorable, straight to the point. However, I have to agree with the previous comment. It does seem a bit short and the rhythm is slightly ...

Just so you know, the seasons are jumbled for a reason. This poem is about changing to fit in, and the indifference of being different. Trying too hard...The season's are ...