SakuraFallsSweetly♥

Hi there! I know, the title is a little strange and I can't seem to find a better one, nor one that will sound un-cliché. But, oh well! If anybody ...

Loved the Chapter! I will do a review on it tomorrow, haven't the time at the minute! Good work! =]

Fabulous chapter! Harriet's character is building more and more. I feel like this chapter really digs into her driven, passionate side for dancing. She cares about it so much, its ...

Awh I love it it's so romantic. =] The chorus is really sweet. Maybe you could extend the verses though, Unless you are one of those who have choppy short ...

This was really good. I actually like, totally loved it. I like how it doesn't have any particular rhyme scheme going on, and the images are just beautiful. You have ...

I'm scared of my own eyes, Of what they see, A dismal expression, Or a reflection of me. So I cover my eyes, I use my shaking hands, Like hide ...

Hello there! I see that you have quite a few grammatical errors in your writing. Are you new to YWS? I wrote like this a couple of years ago but ...

Hey! This poem was good! It had good rhythm, good flow, and it shows feeling clearly, a little too clearly though. Try not to be so raw with your words, ...

This poem is really beautiful. The way it's captured, the words...amazing. Well done! Here's my favourite part: So I'm writing my deeds somewhere in the sandtrusting the winds you send, ...

I wrote this completely randomly, it's just a silly little dorky poem about any girl who sees her boyfriend as amazing! ♥ Clearly, he's not really a super hero :D ...

Hello, Dudette! Great chapter! Firstly, I love the way Harriet always does dorky things and gets embarrassed when Sonny is around, and the way Aiden is always there when she's ...

Hey, Dudette! This story is coming along really well! The characters are being developed more and more and it's not rushing into any key scenes! Well done! I love that ...

Ha ha I loved this! It was pretty light and fun. It's actually a pretty good parody but I find it's not very original. It's grand for a quick read ...

I love this chapter! It made me laugh. The part when Harriet thinks-"How about I just die now?" Is just priceless! Haha. It's a typical FML moment. :P It reminds ...

That was very deep and touching! Very angsty, very teenage, but good! I'm not sure if it was based on real life experience or fiction, I won't ask, but it ...