SakuraFallsSweetly♥

I liked it! I thought it was very cute. Not over the top, just right. The only thing wrong is where you kept switching tenses. Is there more? I think ...

I wake up yawning after a very good night of sleep. I look out the large window of my bedroom to see what the weather is like. It's good. Hot. ...

I thought it was very cute. It had me wondering what will happen next. The storyline is light and original, and it was enjoyable to read. Keep going! Can't wait ...

If only love were like some retro pop song. Simple, but dramatic. Just enough of both. The thing is, when people are "in love", they always say that they don't ...

That was incredible! I found absolutely nothing wrong with it. I loved how you told it, so real. It is very emotional but at the same time it is absolutely ...

That was incredible! I found absolutely nothing wrong with it. That's all I have to say, just incredible! Lots of love, SakuraFallsSweetly♥ (aka Shannon) x x x x

I thought it was really good. But i do think at the first two paragraphs you put just a little too much of a poetic twist into it. Other than ...