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  • Romantic Novels Re: Yes, What a Delightful Boy (2)

    It definatly IS going somewhere! I love that story so you must keep writing or I'll die! I do think you could give a bit more imigary into locke (eg ...

    Apr 24, 2009
  • Romantic Novels Re: As if I was in Love Chp 3 (edited)

    OMG YOU HAVVVEEE TO WRITE MORE OF THAT ! ! ! ! ! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I loved it! it's very realistic and not over the top. Please please please write more?? ...

    Apr 21, 2009
  • Romantic Novels Re: Forbidden Love

    I thought it was awesome! Honestly I loved it. No pressure but write more!! If you do write some more to it could you please PM me???? It seems interesting, ...

    Apr 21, 2009
  • Romantic Novels Re: Yes, What a Delightful Boy (1)

    OMG YOU HAVE TO WRITE MORE!!!!!! I loved this because it's not like other romance stories, I try to write that way but sometimes I can go over the top ...

    Apr 21, 2009
  • Romantic Novels Re: Saved (part 4)

    Even better than the last one! There is just one or two typos. When you said "tine went by faster" Should be "time". There isn't really anything wrong with it. ...

    Apr 21, 2009
  • Romantic Novels Re: Sweet tears, and Chaos. Part 1 of Chapter 3.

    My last day of school in the ninth grade was stressful, chaotic and mean. I can only blame myself for involving myself with him . Here is how it went: ...

    Apr 20, 2009
  • Romantic Novels Re: Saved (part 3)

    That was soooo just as good as the others you moron! lol I loved it. Not to put pressure on you but hurry up and write more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! the story is ...

    Apr 20, 2009
  • Romantic Short Stories Re: Saved

    Loved it!!!!!!!so so good! however i do think you could pull the part where she is being taken away out a bit more, maybe have Ian calling her name and ...

    Apr 19, 2009
  • Romantic Novels Re: Saved (part 2)

    That was incredible! How did you write that?! I loved the emotion in it, it's so sad. . . But it's still awesome. . . Are you writing more? if ...

    Apr 19, 2009
  • Romantic Novels Re: Sweet Tears, and Chaos. Part 2 Chapter 2.

    Journal entry. Tuesday 30th, May. I’m not really sure how but I think I have a friendly date with Jack today. Well, not [i]really a date but just a friendly ...

    Apr 14, 2009
  • Romantic Novels Re: Sweet Tears, and Chaos. Part 1 Chapter 2.

    Time for my second last day at school. I wasn't excited about it. Just another day of being pushed around in the halls by “superiors”. I figured I’m secretly their ...

    Apr 10, 2009
  • Art & Photography Re: Nightfall

    I think the picture is cool, but you could do a little more detail into the woman. Her belly has like no curves. . . if she had then she ...

    Apr 8, 2009
  • Romantic Short Stories Re: Short story (No title, hehe.)

    I liked most of it. She is very independent and I admire that. The only thing that was off to me was when she says she doesn't like popular guys, ...

    Apr 8, 2009
  • Lyrics Re: Take Me Back To 90's

    That'se awesom! 90's were the best years ever! Slappy bracelets, pokemon, when people said SIKE at the end of sentences! Those were the days! Ah I miss those days! Somebody ...

    Apr 8, 2009
  • Romantic Novels Re: Finding You, part 5

    It was really good! I like how you put imagery emotion into it! It's got a very sweet storyline to it, dramatic but not too much. However I do think ...

    Apr 8, 2009


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