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Hello! This piece was very. . .interesting. It was a little bit choppy though, and it could have a bit more detail. but other than that, it was really good! ...

Hi. Please critic. It will be more eventful soon I promise! here goes. We ran in all different directions. I wondered who the man was. He looked angry as he ...

Lol I liked it ! At the beginning I was expecting something totally different. I liked what you did with it though. It was funny and very unique. WHat was ...

Hello there! I really like this piece, like a lot. Hm I really do think that you should have finished it though. It was good, it was cute and it ...

Hey! I really like this story, the characters are cool and that Robin chick seems like a real bitch! Anyhow, I'm hooked on this ha. Its cute you have to ...

Hey guys! this took me ages just to think of the characters so please review! IF you like it that is. I looked out my window, down below at the ...

Gone!!!

I like it. You should definatly write more... I don't quite get the plot though?? Anyways................ HAPPY WRITING!!!! PM me when you continue! x x x x x x

Very good. I like the story line thing in it....and the characters all seem pretty cool. Are you writing more? ? ? ? ? You totally should...unless of course you ...

AWESOME!~!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i loved it.! lots of imagary and emotion......which is g

That was soooooo good!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I wish it was like a book and I could just turn over the page and read what happens next. It totally has me hooked....but I ...

Hey everybody. I decided to put this part (and just this part) in Jack and Callie’s perspectives. Jack. I pushed Hayley away. I didn’t want her at all. How could ...

Hey! I really liked that! I think the storyline to it is really original, never read one like it.♥ As for grammer problems....I found none...! So I would say you ...

I am hooked! I love it. The most recent part of my novel has a rape incident in it too. I just think putting that twist in a story adds ...

Some people think that the school vacations are great. An excuse to party, drink and go out with friends. I, on the other hand, think they are in - convenient. ...