SakuraFallsSweetly♥

I like it! Your style is awesome, very original. Not like, you know, how some people write anything and it's like something everybody has read before?lol But yours is always ...

Hey! I just wrote this when I was in a really good mood, this guy I like was emailing me! Lol I won't bore you all, enjoy. I had never ...

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I liked it. Hm, however I agree that it could use a little more detail on how she felt about losing her best friend? Maybe I'm wrong, we all have ...

Hey! I just wrote this when I was in a really good mood, this guy I like was emailing me! Lol I won't bore you all, enjoy. I had never ...

This is great, to be honest I am surprised it has not gotten much more reviews! It's very good, and emotional. The imagery and emotion is pretty good, one of ...

Hey! Sorry it took me so long to review this, I had to leave yesterday when I was about to. LOL. There was just one part where you forgot J ...

Some editing done. I liked this part sooo people please review. It's going to be more eventful and emotional and all that very soon. I had to put the story ...

That was really really good. I really felt when she was speaking to Jared about her feelings towards crying when he makes comments on it. I think he's a bit ...

OK, so I am hoping this part is a bit better. PLease review. Weeks were passing, we were hanging out more and more. Girls like her were as rare as ...

Another great piece! I'm really loving this story, its very unique. I loved that you put a twist in it like that, it was totally funny and unexpected. You did ...

Omg! I am absolutely loving this! It's fabulous! I like Jessie, he seems realyl sweet. I also really like Merry. She seems like an overall nice person. The stor is ...

Wow! For a first piece, I must say that was incredible! I loved it! But, when you say "the end" do you really mean the end? Are you writing more? ...

:arrow: “No, I’ve got to stay in and look after the kids. Matt’s going out, again” You forgot your full stop. (aka period of the sentence). You did that quite ...

Very cute short story you have on your hands! I liked it, honestly. The only thing is, dialogue. It needs dialogue. I didn't know that untill I went onto YWS. ...