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Re: The Demon Dream
Hello! I would have to disagree with the comment above ^^ I think this is poetry, and you know that. :P Very lyrical poetry, and maybe just space it out ...
Jan 28, 2012 -
Re: Saggitarious
Hey guys, I haven't posted in a while and I just wrote this poem today. I'm not entirely sure why I am calling it Saggittarius, it just came to my ...
Jan 27, 2012 -
Re: You Know When You've Lived
Heya Sista ;) Nice poem. :) But wait, :O you're faced with the fight, Should be: you've been faced with the fight, Just a little nitpick :P Also what that ...
Jan 26, 2012 -
Re: One Word Story
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Dec 24, 2011 -
Re: Desperate Times and Stupid measures
Hello! I've decided to edit this a bit because I now intend on making it a story rather than a short piece like I originally intended. Anyways, I have changed ...
Dec 8, 2011 -
Re: That's So Gay!
That was a great poem! Well done! I've often written ones like this, and it's also something I feel strongly about. You're cool to have put the message out, I ...
Dec 5, 2011 -
Re: you too will turn to dust, one day
WOW!! That was one of the best poems I have EVER read on this! Seriously, unfreakingbelievable! You have so much talent! I loved the first two or three lines =] ...
Dec 2, 2011 -
Re: Sometimes, chapter Twenty-four
That was brilliant! Definitly my favourite chapter so far. Awh I love Sonny =] It's a pitty he isn't real. I like how you developed the whole Harriet and Sonny ...
Nov 28, 2011 -
Re: Six Love Questions
Awh this is the cutest poem ever! You're little sister seems like a smart kid :D I loved this, it was so simple and true. Well done! I don't have ...
Nov 22, 2011 -
Re: Shooting Stars
Hey guys! I'm going to write this novel and I have decided I am going to call it shooting stars, just one problem - I have no idea what to ...
Nov 21, 2011 -
Re: What is the key to writing a killer opening line?
I am writing a novel called Shooting Stars. It is very much unorganized and unfinished. There is one thing bugging me - I can't think of an opening line. What ...
Nov 21, 2011 -
Re: Sometimes, chapter Twenty-three
Ohh things are really getting interesting now ;) This chapter was good, I just want to be able to flip a page open right now and read more. Seriously, more, ...
Nov 8, 2011 -
Re: Sometimes, chapter Twenty-three
Ohh things are really getting interesting now ;) This chapter was good, I just want to be able to flip a page open right now and read more. Seriously, more, ...
Nov 8, 2011 -
Re: Sometimes, chapter Twenty-two
I loved this chapter! And I am so loving Harriet and Aiden. They are so cute, the chemistry is awesome! Just one request- MORE! The story is going so well, ...
Nov 2, 2011 -
Re: Sometimes, chapter Twenty
Awh I loved this chapter! =] I am seriously happy about the Harriet/Sonny moment. :D I like her and Aiden too though, haha. I thought it would be good if ...
Oct 16, 2011
