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Re: Nothing Beats A Water Fall
I had to see that she was okay. She was my best friend, through thick and thin. Who else would help me find my puppy in a rain shower at ...
Nov 23, 2009 -
Re: One For Sorrow
Hey! I was thinking of doing this saga thing. Tell me what you think? Well you know that whole superstition on magpies? One for sorrow, two for joy, three for ...
Nov 9, 2009 -
Re: Lonely man. Desperate.
That was adorable! Loved it. The words and phrases you used here were brilliant. You also were good at keeping the same tense. You would be surprised at how many ...
Oct 25, 2009 -
Re: My Chemical Romance
My Chemical Romance “You like D&D, Audrey Hepburn,(Don’t know what he said), Harry Houdini, and Croquette. You can’t swim, you can’t dance and you don’t know karate. Face it; you’re ...
Oct 23, 2009 -
Re: Fire Angel
Ohhh! Goose bumps or what?! Brilliant. My favourite part: So, descending through the floors of Hell,My wings caught fire, my face black with ash,A malicious smile on my ghostly face,My ...
Oct 23, 2009 -
Re: a rose for the abused..
Wow! You were really clever here, especially with the title that you used! That was just pure genious. The poem was very good. It was deep and the words held ...
Oct 23, 2009 -
Re: Unlove Letters ♥
That was very, very creative! I loved it. I loved how in the first poem where you said The status feels wrong..its one of those lines that I think a ...
Oct 23, 2009 -
Re: NEW Poem Idea based off I'm Not Okay MCR?
So I was gonna do a short poem in Dramatic poetry based on the I'm Not Okay song and music video by My Chemical Romance. What do you think? Yes? ...
Oct 23, 2009 -
Re: All We Know Is Falling.
Yeah, so this is based off of a friend I know who went through a hard time a while back. Don't be too harsh, but be honest! Title credit to ...
Oct 22, 2009 -
Re: Never existed
WHOA! Was this based on Twilight New Moon? I was getting a Twilight vibe there. It was SO good! Mind if I show it to my friend? She is obsessed ...
Oct 22, 2009 -
Re: Dance
Ahh! That was so good! I have never once thought about doing a dance poem. Such a great idea. man it seems sometimes I am the only one with writers ...
Oct 22, 2009 -
Re: Overbid my Romance
Whoa... now that was deep! You used a very good selection of words here, and the length was impressive! It was sort of confusing...or maybe I am just slow...haha. Either ...
Oct 22, 2009 -
Re: It Ends Tonight
WOW! Good idea you had there of writing a poem based on song titles! I was going to do that once but it came out really bad so I didn't ...
Oct 22, 2009 -
Re: You Never Loved Me.
This was really good. The grammar was brilliant! The words were good too. The lenght is...yet another good thing about it! LoL. It was good anywho. I liked it and ...
Oct 22, 2009 -
Re: Even Though
This was a really cute and sweet poem. Sure enough, yes it was short. But that's OK. Not all poems need to be long anyways. Infact I think that the ...
Oct 22, 2009
