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Re: How to make a book longer?!
Hey! I think it's easy to write longer books when you do this; Chapter one Write bullet points. A topic per paragraph, and list what event will happen. Chapter 2 ...
Feb 12, 2010 -
Re: Scary Dream I had
OK, so last night I had the WEIRDEST dream ever! I have no idea what it means though. Me and my friend Edel were mad at My other friend Jenny, ...
Feb 10, 2010 -
Re: Is this a cool idea?
I am actually jeleous! This is a great idea! Go for it. Sounds very interesting, please PM me when you ever post it.
Feb 3, 2010 -
Re: Break My Heart A Little More
yeah that means like everything that is written on the page stays there, along with the sorrows. As in the sorrows written there. Lol x
Feb 1, 2010 -
Re: Break My Heart A Little More
Do you want to see the scars? There's one for each time. A mark for each lie, and a cut for each cry. Do you want to see the tears? ...
Feb 1, 2010 -
Re: All because of a boy. . .
Hey! I know you told me to check this out ages ago but oh well. Here goes; I LOVED THIS! It was so cute, your friendship with Jenny is really ...
Feb 1, 2010 -
Re: Book Idea!
Hm...this one is rather random but give me feedback anyway! Ha ha. OK here goes: OK so my main character's name is Ash. He is seventeen years old and ever ...
Feb 1, 2010 -
Re: Of Loss and Love (chp.9) [newly edited]
Hey! So I decided to skip sleep and review now. :lol: I reall loved this one though! Grr I so want her and Tristin to be together (sighs). I loved ...
Jan 28, 2010 -
Re: The YWS 2009 Yearbook
Man, I just love YWS! It's so cool. It really helped with my writing, (I get A's in English on a regular basis!:D) So that's good, and everybody is very ...
Jan 7, 2010 -
Re: The Last Walk
Whoa. That was...different. In a good way though! I loved it. Your use of imagery is so intriguing, and the technique for sound effects was brilliant. Other than one or ...
Jan 7, 2010 -
Re: Rain
Hey! Loved this piece. It was absolutely beautiful. I am not going to pick out mistakes because; I am not a critical reviewer and I genuinely only pick out the ...
Jan 7, 2010 -
Re: Of Loss and Love (chp.8) [newly edited]
Hey! I hate seeing stories with no reviews, thought I'd help out. I like the narrator. Seems cool. I also like the technique, the writing style that you used. It's ...
Jan 7, 2010 -
Re: Song stuck in your head?
Things I'll Never Say - Avril Lavigne.
Jan 5, 2010 -
Re: Letters To The Unreadable
Hey guys. It has been a while since I posted, I know. This letter is basically my thoughts on a guy. Bad break - up. So I didn't write any ...
Jan 5, 2010 -
Re: Dynamite
That's a really great song! I loved it. The first verse is my favourite. I'm not sure if it was an accident when you repeated pretty, but I thought it ...
Jan 3, 2010
