Saichi

Wow! Might I say that this was truly an excellent review! You made some wonderful points that will truly help me to edit and revise this prologue to the story ...

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I totally agree with you. I was a bit unsure of how I should go about the reuniting of Percy and Lys. So, I just threw in something. I will ...

I will be sure to check up on everything you have brought to my attention, and I thank you for the review! ^^ Although, I'm a bit confused as to ...

I can't even tell you how much I appreciate this review! This was exactly what I needed! I personally had never even thought of placing a different writing style whenever ...

Thank you, that really means a lot! ^^

Thank you for that review! ^^ I greatly appreciate it! It is rather long, I do agree. I might get a tad bit carried away, because I hope to become ...