Saeric

Hi there, I'm (clearly) somewhat new. I don't really have many interesting things to say about myself and I used up all of my paragraph energy when I finished my ...

I really like the first two stanzas - they are a little vague, but that's alright and it works. The flow of the last one seemed a little off to ...

A monster storm was brewing that night, the kind men bragged about surviving for years afterward. The kind of storm that arrived so suddenly and struck so mercilessly that nothing ...

I have to agree with kaiden, sorry. This poem is really too small and generic to say anything. The problem is not the length, but rather that it is so ...