Sae

Welcome back, Sae! We're more than happy to see you around again. :D Thanks! :elephant:

This is pretty good! I enjoyed the rhyme, although it was somewhat confusing for me. *lame review*

Nobody really knows me because I left shortly after I joined and have not been on for about a month now. I'm back, though... :D

This is rather short- nearly too short for a proper review. I agree with the previous poster. You could elaborate on it more... It does have potential, none-the-less. :D

This poem has some nice wording and flow in it. I liked how the verses sound clear. I must admit, like Velvet.whispers, I did not quite understand this poem, as ...

Thank you! Usually I am worried when I post my first piece on a new website- especially one that I wrote at midnight... Thanks for the review!

Wow... Thanks! :)

Okay... I wrote this at night when I couldn't sleep, so I tried writing in a different style. I don't really think it is all that great, but I want ...

Jeans, t-shirt, Try a phrase that draws you in to the poem some more. normal appearance, but hurting inside, waiting for life to turn around, but it never seems to ...

Okay, I personally didn't really like the Twilight series, but I will review this as if I liked Twilight a lot. So... somehow, you managed to sound nearly exactly like ...

gfvtgvft Good fried vends toys going very fast today. That made no sense. *headdesk*

Okay, I'm going to try to review... I found that this story had an intriguing story-line, and it captured my attention. It was rather descriptive, and overall was pretty good. ...

Hehe... I come from YWO, and a bunch of YWS members were joining over there. I decided to check out YWS. :)

'Ello. Are you thecollecter from YWO?

Okay... I am high energy, random, um... I am a bit touchy at times on certain topics... But I try not to be... I donno. This is hard.