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Re: Forever in my Soul
hmmmmm.......... It's a strange thing to write about....but you told me to read it and I did. Keep writing.
Dec 22, 2006 -
Re: Elemental
Hey.....good job in it. I mean I haven't heard the full story. BUT pay attention in English class. You have a lot of spelling mistakes.
Dec 21, 2006 -
Re: innocence
Good story. Hope to see more soon.
Dec 16, 2006 -
Re: War of the Shadow Ch 1
Great story. But I would work on it a little. I mean....you jumped right to the action. You didn't give the setting or anything or introduce the characters. Other than ...
Dec 15, 2006