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Alright first of all, GREAT story. I thought it was one of the best things I've ever read. I was sad too. In the end. Second, you might need to ...

The Night to remember is the night in which you find you true love. The Night ot remember is the night where you feel you can do anything you could ...

hmmmmm.......... It's a strange thing to write about....but you told me to read it and I did. Keep writing.

Hey.....good job in it. I mean I haven't heard the full story. BUT pay attention in English class. You have a lot of spelling mistakes.

Good story. Hope to see more soon.

~It was quiet, late in the open battle field of Serinia. The elves were still hiding in the trees ready to fire upon the enemy at any given moment. The ...

Great story. But I would work on it a little. I mean....you jumped right to the action. You didn't give the setting or anything or introduce the characters. Other than ...