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Thank you all for your kind kind words :) @ BlueAfrica - I'm glad you liked it. Yes I know on a page the lines look different and probabl;y awkward ...

It was brilliant! You've done a really fine job with the free verse - narrated your nostalgia, taken us back with you to '98 to your family gathering some place ...

It reminded me of a Donne poem, I cannot remember which. It invoked a similar scenery and emotion. Decent write, I'd say. But you could've used fresher imagery or used ...

Lets it fester and brood. I was often given the same advice and it left me blank. I later realized that I probably had much to say but wasn't sitting ...

Amen. I started off writing lyrics, rap lyrics to be more precise. So, the training period of rhyming got taken care off. A dozen rap battles on online forums are ...

Glad that there's a "Rhyme Battle" thread here. This is gonna be one of my fav chill zones ;) I'm otherwise a text-battle rapper ( sounds queer? well its not, ...

One day walking my way back home, I see a dusty abandoned Cadillac the original black merging into the rusty red burnt in a riot or probably something else near ...