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  • Novel / Chapter » Spiritual, Supernatural Re: Divine Intervention: Chapter One

    I mainly thought the ending was rushed, but you were much improved in chapter 2.

    Apr 2, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Spiritual, Supernatural Re: Divine Intervention: Chapter One

    Dang dude! You can write! I got lost in the story before I even got half-way in, but I did notice a couple of inconsistencies. It seemed kind of rushed ...

    Apr 2, 2016


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