SASSYLADY333

Okay so here it is. This is the post, I will go back do some editing and decide where to take this. So please point out any grammar errors or ...

Thank you!!! Thank you both! p.s- thanks for finally reviewing this comerade! ;) p.p.s- Well since you all like it so much...I'll write something more, God knows i have the ...

Hahaha! That was awesome! I absolutely love your characters, and I can't wait for the sequel. :).

Yeah definetly! I have a hard time with my tenses thank you for pointing that out. :) I'm glad you liked it, and who doesn't love the Victorian ages? Thanks ...

Sorry for the shortness! I didn;t want to put the story line yet because it requires some research. And I hate to make an extra long post, as I do ...

Thank you both! It's much appreciated :)!

In the post it says part two continued...But thanks! And for anyone esle who didn't know, this is my fourth post of this story. And this is Part Two continued. ...

Thank you for feed back! :)

Well not in here, but in Romantic Fiction I have some prose that goes unreviewed! I could review some of your work if you would like :) ;)!

And the smiles were a big help! :) I hope you'll like my edit. Thanks again!

Thank you! That was actually helpful and not painful!

That was very helpful, thank you! p.s.- I thought there was something choppy about it...

Thanks for the review! And i do see your point about the descirptions. I haven't written in a while and this time I actually tried to make sure my grammar ...

I have a feeling I'm going to like the story continues I mean. So I have to say very engaging!

Ah, thanks! That was actually helpful and I can see where I need to improve. Most people tell me that in my stories I tell but I don't show...Something like ...