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Thank for pointing out the grammatical errors! I knew there was some in there but you know how it is when you read it over and over it looks just ...

Thanks for your reviews! Jessie2009, yes I have written more I'm actually in the process of finishing the whole thing. I'm glad that you liked it! Marci3ly, well you said ...

You're welcome I'm glad I helped :) This is actually the first time I've cricitqued anything in detail so I'm glad you were able to understand what I was telling ...

So I decided I’ll go along with it all and continue the generations, and I still haven’t understood the fact s directly. I think starting off the first chapter with ...

Thank you! And I'm always up for new music :)

Thank you! And thank's for point out those errors :). I hate reading it over and over again, and not finding what to correct. Hopefully my teacher felt the same ...

Can someone please , please give me a review? ): It would be much appreciated, thank you in advance.

Thank you! Yeah, I didn't want to write this prompt. I had to force myself and the message pulled itself out. I'm glad that you liked it! [And I finally ...

Thanks for the review! And yeah I need tons more description in this, and really how didn't you know she was normal? I guess the whole then with her conscious ...

I would like to know if this prompt is boring, or over detailed??? I'm not sure everyone I know is to lazy to read it, feedback [even if you just ...

Let's see, "cannot" to can not. And I believe the last sentence is not right, it makes no sense to contradict yourself. Maybe go back over this, and string your ...

Edward? What happened? He just didn't even seem like Edward to me anymore, most of the time. Exactly! I felt like his character changed completely, and the chemistry wasn't the ...

The Same Place But Different

I agree with mostly everyone at this point, but I don't think I was in LOVE with the book. I just felt like a lot of things didn't make sense. ...

I decided that I liked the book! I didn't mind the pregnancy until Jacob imprinted on her, it was like a bad fan ficition...I hated it! I was okay with ...