Ryukun7

This poem really cuts deep. I can feel your emotions through your words. I think it's one of your best poems, and that you really put your heart into this. ...

I appreciate the critique. I definitely should have proofread this piece before posting it. This is actually an older piece of work. I agree that the second part is compressed. ...

Thanks for the critique and advice! That was very helpful. Maybe I'll rewrite the beginning one day.

The Black Door “And you claim this story is true, Ms. Landers?” a tall man lounging in his leather armchair questioned. “I swear sir, that’s what the girl told me. ...

I have a confession to make. I never really tried to save him. I actually am the one that committed the crime. I killed him. This thought has been probing ...

Wow...this was amazing! It was put together so well! I loved the ending, and the tie-in to the title. Plus, the script had me laughing a lot, especially on Betty's ...