RyleighInWonderland

Thanks! I love your idea about fire being out of control.

Hi! I'm just gonna give a quick review. The one thing that I can say is that You repeat the "all" sound over and over and it starts becoming monotonous.

Thank you for your help!

Thank you, but could you explain what purple prose is? Also, I mostly write how I would say it, so that's why there are incomplete sentences. It's supposed to be ...

MJTucker, that's incorrect. The dictionary states "Their is the possessive case of the pronoun they, as in %u201DThey left their cell phones at home.%u201D ... There is also used as ...

This was such a sweet little poem! It didn't need the extreme length some do to tell a story of two people who are so close they are able to ...

Why thank you very much!

Also, "their" is a gender neutral term for something of ownership. Like, if you found someone's phone you might say, "I just found this phone. I would call them but ...

Thank you and I'll take everything into consideration, though I didn't file this under poetry.

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Now i'm not big on poetry but some of the context actually fits the lives of poet's that I am friends with. I'm not totally sure if what I got ...

Thank you very much!

Thank you! For the praise and constructive criticism. I'll be sure to put these into effect.