Rydia

This sounds interesting. And an interesting plot needs an interesting character =) I'm going to edit the bio format a little to make some things clear: Real Name= Tom Kyrvoshki ...

I'll be going away pretty soon too but I shall look after your character during your first week of absence and then I'm sure the others can take care of ...

Kestrel "If he'll have me," Kes replied. "I'll take all the training I can get!" Stella laughed lightly as she led the way down to Kai's room. "Very determined, aren't ...

Alyssa I don't like the look of the blood on that cloth. There's quite a lot and it could be one of several life-threatening diseases. Quite equally it could be ...

It was an innocent enough question XD Ayumi - we're having lots of fun =) But we missed you soooooo much! Warren After a quick glance at the growing mass ...

BloodSunset: I'd appreciate it if you read my posts thoroughly - your character already knows mine through a history of being arrested by her and please remember that she's a ...

Oh? Does that mean Dynamo needs to post next?

Kestrel Kestrel paused at the top of the ladder. "Thank you for teaching me, sir." She smiled and bowed briefly before hurrying down the path towards the college. As she ...

Gerard shivered and he began to cry, rubbing the tears away fiercely with his fists as he crawled to his feet and stumbled about the cavern. His legs felt stiff ...

(I was going to have a shot at explaining it but I'm lazy and I'm sure you all have awesome imaginations.) Kestrel Kes paused as she considered her answer, as ...

Raven "Looks like I'm going to be taking a break sooner than expected," Raven said with a tired smile as she released the water and the ship jerked sharply as ...

Alyssa They've talked for almost ten minutes now and appear to have reached a decision: they're walking away, towards a building, or rather they're hurrying but stealthily. The man has ...

Warren The morning came too soon and with a groan, Warren rolled out of his bed and hit the floor, jerked from his sleep in an instant to find himself ...

Kestrel Kes stared closely at the glowing reiatsu within the pearl and for a moment she was content to feel it flowing clockwise, swirling around its container in a smooth, ...

Was this intended as a storybook or is it the start of a piece of fiction that you've written and would like critiques on? If it's the latter then pm ...