Rydia

Lol. In York? I just got back from there. I don't live there, in fact it's more than an hour's bus journey away but I go to college there every ...

The plot sounds wasy to relate to which is always good and if you have more details and other conflicts then I'm sure it's fine. As for what to do, ...

I like the plot ideas but I don't think the paragraph you've written so far is all that great. I's rather cliche and the description could be stronger. Go with ...

Oh wow. Good luck with those competitions and I'd love to take a look at your work when you get round to posting it!

This looks like a really good site for anyone who has trouble with their grammar. Thanks for posting it.

I've never written solely for the purpose of being published but yes, I'd love to get some of my work published and have made attempts to have it published but ...

Of course it's a good idea and I would have a go at reading it. I've only studied Spanish for a year but I'm taking it as an AS next ...

Hehe. I love bonfire night! Three years ago was particularly interesting when my friends burned a replica of one of our teachers rather than Guy Fawkes. I didn't get to ...

Ooooh. Totally off topic (well not quite) but anyone interested in the theory of time being a fourth dimension and creating the hypercube should watch the films cube and hypercube. ...

Ah, an interesting topic. Cal is right. Prince Philip married Elizabeth before she took the throne so he could not claim the title of king. If he had married her ...

I don't think it should be capitalised based on the fact that you wouldn't if you was refering to your character as the girl before you gave her a name. ...

I don't agree with many of these. In fact, I think I only agree with two or three but it's quite amusing to read.

Dia de los Muertos? Doesn't that translate as day of the dead or is my spanish just really poor?

Wow, that's a lot of projects but they all sound interesting and you're right, there's nothing wrong with multiple projects. I'd die if I could only work on one novel ...

No. The fourth of July is an American only holiday because it's to celebrate their liberation from the British Government. In fact, I didn't even know it existed until about ...