Rydia

1. Critique it as you would normally but perhaps be just a touch more careful not to be offensive and such. 2. If they're your friends, you know what they ...

A rather humorous little tip you have here! And you make a good point Twit, sometimes it's bad when there's an ambiguous sentence in the middle of a really serious ...

I tried this once and it was lots of fun and it helped me out a lot because I realised that I'd put the wrong year for a wedding between ...

I think that 'shotting' should be shooting and I think you need a warning in your title of this post for the swearing but yeah, it sounds like a good ...

These are some nice tips and you're right, research isn't always fun but it's essential. Thanks for writing these, Chocoholic.

Well you caught my attention as soon as you mentioned twins. Lol. I'm very fond of twins and I think some of the best characters throughout literature have been twins ...

The old plot sounds interesting if rather cliche but I'm intrigued, why not post a brief summary of the new plot here? It might encourage myself and others to go ...

Hehe. I've used untitled before and you're right, it's rubbish but it's better than 'pain' or 'loneliness' for sure. To say that this was rather vague, it's still very useful ...

Hi there. I didn't meet you before so... it's nice to meet you.

$Hmmm. That's a good point. Some books have way too much action these days and I'm always relieved when I find a story that takes the time to explain things ...

I think that's a good direction to approach it from but perhaps take a brief look at the stereotypical male too so you can do a comparrison? Maybe have three ...

Hehe. I love this film. In fact, I was watching it the other day and Inigo is easily my favourite character. I'd never thought about him in terms of writing ...

The second one sounds like it might be an interesting plot but you should probably give us more information if you want to get us interested.

You make some good points but how the death is portrayed is not necessarily the most important factor. The setting and dialogue before the death can lead to the surprise ...

Some very good tips here, especially those on which words rhyme and which don't. I attempted some rather ridiculous combinations when I first started writing poetry.