Rydia

I'm not so sure about the guy's hair but I like the shading on these two and the guy's outfit is very cool.

I like what you've done so far and I'd love to see the finished version!

Oooh. I'm intrigued. I shall have to get my hands on some of her work now...

I hate the rain. It always makes me sad but then I associate it with bad memories so I suppose it depends on your own experiences. I certainly use it ...

I love the fourth, it looks so mystical, the way the water reflects the sun and the trees lining the sides. Brilliant! The third is a little plain but the ...

Don't worry, just keep going and I'm sure everything will turn out fine. Claire and me had a few problems with our story because we wanted it to be based ...

They both write excellent poetry. Hitcher is amazing but I'm rather fond of the laboratory too.Hmmm. Then there's stealing... Sorry, I can't decide.

I like this one, just wishing I could see the whole sword though. It looks interesting.

This one's rather cool but his face is rather hard to make out with his hair like that and the hat doesn't look so great.

The chest is a bit skinny but other than that it's a nice sketch. The trousers are well detailed and I like the face.

I second the ones by Phillip pullman and George Orwell. Excellent books! Also, I've only read one by Lois Lowry but it was very enjoyable. As for my own suggestions... ...

I think description is essential. A reader needs the visual image.

Yeah I think it does. That's an awful lot of conditions!

I've experienced very little in the way of roamnce but I've written a fair few love poems, some negative and some positive. In fact my quote is the first stanza ...

This ones brilliant! I love the vibrant colours and the contrast with the dark sky.