Rydia

Whenever it sounds right but then, that's different for every writer is it not? I don't like to have really long lines so I always break before it's further than ...

I like the coloured versions a lot but I think they're less detailed than the first. The bottom one is full of emotion though and I love how bold all ...

1. I think you could cut out quite a lot of the sky to draw more attention to the clouds and islands but it's very scenic and I love the ...

This is really good! I think the nose could be a little better but the eyes are beautiful and the hair is very well drawn. The bottom eyelashes on the ...

Congratulations Alleycat! You have some beautiful imagery =)

That's so pretty! I want to live in the Ferral Nebula!

I like it! Admittedly, the shape needs some work but your shading is nice and it's a good, rough sketch. Maybe you could have a whole bowl of SS fruit!

Some of the lines are a little rough but it's really cute! And that is one awesome hair style. If you want to make it scary, the eye will certainly ...

I love how detailed these are! The shading could be improved but they're very well drawn. The second one's shoes are different sizes and the first one might look better ...

Hmmm. Well I suppose I can give you some ideas but why don't you be a little more specific. What genre do you want to write?

Okay, this is definitely not appropriate for a young writer's site. The link isn't even to a book and I suggest that someone who has the power to do so ...

I think the shading could be improved and the others are right about him being stiff but generally he's really good. I like how you've done his paws and the ...

Did someone mention Cat? Sounds cool!

This is very pretty but perhaps you should have added a few more bits of the picture, just really tiny places scattered across the middle to give an even stronger ...

The black and white theme is very effective, the angle of the book is great and the feather quill really adds to that archaic, traditional feel. Also, I love that ...