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Re: NaPoWriMo?
I'm totally up for it! But I think I'll post my poems in my blog for now and then just display the ones I like best in the literary forum.
Apr 1, 2008 -
Re: Coca-cola
I think this is pretty good. The colouring is lovely and the little stars are really cute. I think the expression is rather strange but then, that makes for an ...
Mar 31, 2008 -
Re: Kitten Puppy at Play
Those are some really good photos. They're a little out of focus in places but those kittens are so cute! I love the last one with the dark and light. ...
Mar 30, 2008 -
Re: Acacia Lore
I'll not repeat what others have said but I agree with all comments so far and also, the face needs work. The nose is too low down and not really ...
Mar 21, 2008 -
Re: Questions about Reviews & so on...
1. Sometimes if a piece is really long or filled with spelling mistakes, people will take one look and then turn away. Other times it could be due to the ...
Mar 6, 2008 -
Re: Featured Member - March '08!
Congratulations!
Mar 6, 2008 -
Re: Milkman!
Awww, that's a really vute little cartoon. You should give him a milk carton or a bottle of milk to justify the name! I think the ear needs a line ...
Feb 7, 2008 -
Re: The madness of Hunter's couch
Awww, look at the cute little stick people! Cute drawing dear though I think the lines could have been smoother and the little stick people might have appreciated some hair.
Feb 6, 2008 -
Re: Aspects of the Backyard
1. Good work with the shadows but maybe a little over the top? Or maybe in the wrong place - it might be a good idea to block out the ...
Feb 2, 2008 -
Re: Unchained Dragon
I think it would defineately benefit from some shading and work on the webbing between the spikes. It should dip more and have lines across, shading, more of an opaque, ...
Jan 28, 2008 -
Re: Pigs!
They're very sweet. I think you should create a background for it. Like, put them in a cartoony pig sty or something. Also, the outline is a little un-even. Maybe ...
Jan 9, 2008 -
Re: Dragon... :UPDATED:
I think the head is a little out of proportion with the rest of the body but the details are great and it's generally very well drawn. I think the ...
Jan 6, 2008 -
Re: Your Boat Is Sinking And You Have Thirty Seconds To Evacuate
1. Life raft - No explanation required. 2. Two day supply of water - Again, very obvious. 3. Signal flares - Worth a try and I'm sure I'd be able ...
Jan 4, 2008 -
Re: Coloring Pixel
It's very small so it's hard to see any of the finer detail but it's not a bad cartoon. I think the text is hard to read in that colour ...
Jan 2, 2008 -
Re: The Artificer's Angel
I like this in general but I think the boots need quite a bit more work and I agree that it's very dark so there isn't really a lot of ...
Dec 31, 2007
