Rydia

Via - That makes 26 so I owe you another three critiques. Make sure you get in touch =) DesperateRomantic - Thanks for the help! Points have been donated.

My room. Or in front of the computer. Though I think deeply a lot of time so when I'm wandering around college or whatever as well.

Thank you, that makes it 15 so I owe you another critique.

Thank you! Let me know what you want critiquing.

I think it's a reasonable idea though I'd suggest to make it a temporary or infrequent basis. Like, it could be hosted at christmas for a christmas ball and perhaps ...

Thanks everyone, I just finished donating the points and for those collecting credits, I will post your totals on the storybook.

Thank you Via! Points are on the way and I also owe you a critique.

Congratulations Dono and Areida. Well done, first dance goes to you! But I want second ;)

Good luck with that Muffin and if you get bored of the real world, we'll be here waiting for you. Will miss you, Heather xx

Congratulations everyone and yay for Nate's dog! Oh and thank you very much Suzie, great job =)

Well it's still morning so lots hasn't happened but here's one from yesterday - Mark (my little brother): Awww, Heather needs a hug. She's sad. Me: No. Thoughtful. Mark: Sadly ...

You're right Cade but I'm determined to get it down as far as possible and thanks for all your help, it means a lot to me. Thank you Piepie, you're ...

Oh wow, those are awesome! I love the pirates one and Jaws.

I think I found it more creepy and strange than addicting but then, I was concentrating on the words quite a lot to see if I could translate some of ...

I feel sorry for the poor woman who fell over. I mean, how many times did those jerks have to show the clip? That was just cruel.