Rydia

I suppose I'll add my welcome as well though it's a little belated... Well, welcome anyway.

1. Do you outline? Not much when I'm writing on my own but in a joint novel it's quite important to do so. 2. Do you write straight through, or ...

Very beautiful. Normally I would say that a script needs speech but this one is designed perfectly to be a silent movie. One suggestion is that perhaps if you shoot ...

Considering I don't know Pedro or the story that he's from, I found it very easy to understand the two characters. You're shakespearean dialect is a little out in places ...

Jimmy: Not me, my mom says I don’t have that much family, some weird thing happened I don’t know she doesn’t tell me much about it. Here I think you ...

Very interesting. I'd certainly like to read more. Do you intend to post the rest?

Hi there, I suppose it's about time I introduce myself properly. Here's a short bio... Name= Heather Marie Warren. Age= 17. Nationality= English. Hair= Brown. Eyes= Brown. Figure= Quite tall, ...

First off I'd like to say well done because I know how hard it can be to write a villanelle and you've done a really good job. For me, the ...

I think the idea behind this poem is good and it has potential but I agree that your grammar needs improvement and your images could be stronger. I also picked ...

First off, I think that you should put your stage directions in bold or italics so that they are seperated from the dialect. Then I'd like you to add more ...

I think I'm going to do this one a paragraph at a time - The four sat in opposite corners, never quite knowing how exactly they had gotten there... I'm ...

I think that this poem started really well but then it got a little repetetive. I think that you can completely cut this stanza - Why cant you just feel ...

I felt that some of the language in this was nice but it was spoil by words such as 'till.' Why not just use 'until?' It sounds much better and ...

The context of this poem is good and it is a difficult issue to cover but I do feel that you could have used a stronger format. As Snoink says, ...

It's called a Rondelet.