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Re: Piracy Upon the Sea
Ooooh. I'm watching the film in just under two hours and will certainly join... Name= Amelia Jones Nickname= Lia Age= 23 Hair= Chestnut brown, not far off red, and long ...
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Re: The Storm Snatchers #1
I shall also add a crit. In general, I loved this and will certainly be looking out for more but your punctuation is off in a few places and there ...
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Re: COSMONAUTiCAL
The blue is nice and bright on mine but admittedly the orange is too close to yellow to stand out against it and it could do with something a little ...
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Re: A Lost cause
Yup. I have five or six going myself and only one is anywhere near completion but I shall get around to them and I'm sure you'll manage to finish yours. ...
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Re: Tamora Pirece
I love her 'magic circle' series and I didn't see anything wrong with the Alanna series. I thought they were very interesting. 'The protector of the small' quartet that were ...
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Re: Are you going to Scarborough Fair?
Hey there Cath, nice to meet you and welcome to YWS. I'm rather new myself so I don't know everything about the site but if you want a critique just ...
May 31, 2007 -
Re: Necropolis
Katalyn "I already told you Louis, I'm not wearing that," I sighed as my manager edged into the room I'd got in a small hotel. "Aw come on kitten," Louis ...
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Re: my icons! [yay!]
I love the one with the cookie! The others are nice too but they're not particularly cute, funny or intellectual so not my type of icon but nice all the ...
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Re: A self-portrait
Wow, if this cartoon is anything to judge by, you're a beautiful and talented young woman with a very unique dress style.
May 31, 2007 -
Re: And hold your breath... one minute, two minute and your DEAD
I don't think the title really fits this poem. I actually found it rather blunt and if you are keeping it, the 'your' should be you're. Other than that, I ...
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Re: what you do to me
I liked this poem quite a lot but I have a few criticisms to make... First off, on the first line of the second stanza, it needs to be 'you're' ...
May 31, 2007 -
Re: Necropolis
Wow. Just read through your story and it's really interesting, hope you don't mind if I join... Name= Katalyn. Nickname= Kat. Age= 19. Hair= Long, chestnut brown and wavy. Eyes= ...
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Re: The Flight Plan That Changed The World
Not big on flying but I guess I'll give it a go... Name= Kestrel Age= 29 Gender= Female Race= English Rank= Junior pilot Years of flight= four years Hair= Black ...
May 30, 2007 -
Re: In General, Most People Are...
The goods have it at the moment =) but then I think we're all insane... 'Only the insane may prosper and only the prosperous may jusdge who is sane and ...
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Re: Much Like Falling
As a mass of land shuddered into view, Scott realised he had made a mistake. As he stared down at his stiff shirt and well scrubbed boots, Scott realised he ...
May 30, 2007
