Rydia

I think it's great though not so sure about the birth-mark/ freckle on her face.

The movie is awesome and the books are even better. I hope that they make them all this time, including the magician's nephew because no one has attempted that one ...

'I kissed thee ere I killed thee. No way but this. Killing myself, to die upon a kiss.' That's from Othello and spoken by Othello to Desdemona.

Hello. This is Rashel Lotus and I'm reporting from 'The Solar Express Mark 5.' Do not fear brave citizens of Earth, we may be your last chance but we will ...

I liked this piece and I didn't find enough mistakes to merit copying your whole post so here are the lines with their corrections. They're in chronological order so it ...

It's very pretty but I agree that it's a rather dull sunset. The palm tree is certainly nice though. I wish we had scenery like that where I live.

Okay, this was very good and I only found two or three mistakes so let's get that out of the way first... Jackie nodded. She was Alexandria’s biggest fan. Alexandria ...

Katalyn After Louis left, Kat finished applying her make up and turned to the mirror. Perfect. Well near enough anyway. Kat gathered the items she had used and laid them ...

First off, I'm not sure that this is a poem. It doesn't have the right structure and it's written like a story but integrates some poetic techniques... I'll let someone ...

I like the description in this piece and your choice of adjectives is really good. The indention is also really effective and I can't see much wrong with this so ...

Well done to Snoink for finding those mistakes. I just wanted to comment on a few lines... Most friends in the dark, Best friend try’s to help, But when you’re ...

This poem is very well written. In fact, I couldn't find any mistakes at all which is unusual for me. The one thing I did notice is a slight lack ...

Amelia With the wind in my hair and the smell of the sea, I was happy to be alive, even if I was once more drifting through the unknown. Slowly, ...

This isn't my usual sort of story and there wasn't a lot of action but it's well written and inserting the diary so that we can see Alexandrias real thoughts ...

Peace and Hope What are pure peace and everlasting hope? But a short, sweet moment of reflection, Or something without which we cannot cope. I will point you in the ...