Rydia

I'll second that those typos need correcting and the rhythm is off in places but this is a nice piece that's easy to relate to. The last two lines of ...

It was very well written but accurate use of language and poetic techniques but I feel that you use repetition just a little too often. Also, in addition to the ...

Hey Alainna, let me see... I'm not quite a London girl. I live about an hour away in a town called Selby but I've been a few times. My other ...

Yes, that's better. Very pretty.

To say that this was only short, I actually found it repetetive but that's probably because you end two lines with way and two with cry. This song needs more ...

It rings a bell in my memory but it'sbeen a good few years since I read any of pullman's books so I can't be certain. They are on my list ...

Nice to meet you Olivia, I too am a huge fan of Johnny Depp so we already have something in common. Welcome to YWS and I'll probably see you around ...

Oh yes, we got our fair share of invasions. Geoffrey was the third brother I believe but he played little part in it. I think people have pretty much covered ...

The first is my favourite. The sunset is amazing and the boats are outlined perfectly. They look a little like pirate ships actually but that could just be my obsession ...

I love this poem. The language is very accurate, the rhyme and rhythm are perfect and basically I couldn't find a single mistake. It's often hard to write in such ...

It's a nice little poem but I think you should extend it. Delve deeper into the moral issues and problems surrounding such risky surgery and look at what chance they ...

Remembrance Day. (2005) (11th November 11:11) A field of wet, red poppies, All glistening in the sun. Some women pick as trophies But it isn’t just for fun. Here on ...

Welcome to YWS Kat. If you want a crit on any of your work, feel free to pm me with the link.

Before I can really comment you need to write a lot more...

Sorry, I'm not one for modern art. It just looks like a scribble to me.