Rydia

In a sketch, a few adjectives are sufficient for description while dialogue is necessary so you have your priorities right. Just remember that description helps to bring your characters alive ...

Hi there. You're right, I don't remember you but then I only joined a few weeks ago so can you blame me? If you post any of your art photography ...

Hi and welcome to YWS Jane. I just finished critiquing your story and if you want any of your future work commented on, feel free to pm me, luv Heather ...

Hey there and welcome! This piece is full of raw emotions and it's very well written. The one thing I would say is that it's not the most unique of ...

A rather accurate map. Well done, I'd have made a real mess if I tried it.

Hello and welcome my crazy friedn! Who said a writer had to be sane? It's nice to have you here! Heather xx

The pact by Jodi picoult briefly covers teenage pregnancy but it mostly features on suicide so if you want the books just for the purposes of research, not the best ...

Hello Raine, nice to have you with us. If you want any of your work critiqued, feel free to pm me, Heather xx

Ariel looks good as a boy and the face of Erica is beautiful but the body needs a little work. Very good though, much better than anything I could do ...

Good maps but I agree that some colour would be nice and perhaps some sort of the symbol where the tows are. Just a little something that resembles buildings would ...

The first and fourth are brilliant and so is the sixth to a lesser extent. The second is alright too, though not the best of flowers, but the others didn't ...

Thank you! We've just started this one and are currently working on it but if you want to read any of mine/our work just have a look at my profile. ...

Okay, just going to pick out the spelling mistakes and miswordings but I suggest you read through and check your punctuation too. I always seem to miss those mistakes. Hope ...

I've avoided this piece some time as I have not read 'The taming of the shrew' but I thought I'd have a look... I found this rather humouress and it ...

Yeah, I'm pretty sure those were around then.