Rydia

Very nice. Yes, always a good idea if you're finding writing difficult, just write a poem on not being able to write a poem. Lol. I like this and in ...

I like the second background best but both are really good. I love the hair!

There's some nice imagery in this piece and I'm guessing it's poetic prose rather than poetry? Hmmm. This site probably needs an official place for poetic prose with the amount ...

Does this quiz never end?

After that rather thorough critique what is there left for me to say? Lol. I liked this chapter and you've introduce the character Edna well and a good cliff-hanger there ...

Again I didn't really like the format of this poem. When dealing with powerful emotions, you need to convey them through imagery and other poetic techniques. Also, this line made ...

Okay, first impression is that it's a nice poem but regular rhyme and irregular rhythm is rather strange. On the eighth line I think you mean gone numb rather than ...

Hey there and welcome to YWS. If you want any of your work critiqued or are feeling a little lost, feel free to pm me, Heather xx

Yeah I've had a few short stories and poems published in anthologies. Just search the web and send them off to the different competitions. One sec, I'll check who did ...

The sky is amazing, almost as it the sun is attempting to part the clouds and the reflection on the river is very beautiful.

Hi Jasmine! Let me see... Well I have to admit that it's a little short but it has a nice beat to it and the words flow together well. Simple ...

The first thing this piece needs is more description. You use phrases such as 'she eventually fell down' while barely mentioning the struggle. We want to see how hard this ...

This story was good but you should build up the tension more and add a little more description. Maybe describe the scenery that your character's running past. A nice piece ...

I love the storyline and I'm already feeling really sorry for Jamie, she seems to have a very hard life. This piece was well written with some good description and ...

Hey there and welcome to YWS. If you want a critique on anything you post or need help finding your way around the site, feel free to pm me. What ...