Rydia

I was sort of thinking about that Snoink but he is very creepy and well drawn.

I like the idea of this poem but it's rather simplistic and repetetive. Also I wanted to comment on two of the lines in particular... we we get new, I ...

Some of your imagery in this poem is really nice and I like the extended metaphor of the guardian angel. Very good, a poem almost anyone can relate to and ...

This part was very nice and I'm glad you took the time to describe Forrest though he's certainly not what I expected. Just a few poits to make on this ...

Ahoy Jasmine and welcome. You might want to change the name of your character Tara as we kind of already have a Tara but other than that it's fine by ...

But that's the beauty of it! I loved it because it was so insane and imaginative. Johnny Depp was awesome! Can't wait for number four. I just wish I could ...

Okay, first off if you're going with the whole repetition thing you have to be consistent. I think it's just the one line but it still annoyed me - bubble ...

How much is the house on sale for? In fact where is it? Is it in England, America or elsewhere? I want it! As for the photos, I like the ...

Oooh, looks like I just put the vote to 24 all. Sorry about that...

I think that archaic language can be powerful when used correctly but it doesn't fit the rather modern structure of this poem. Rhyming couplets yes but a different rhyme each ...

Hey Jake, Let me see... First ff yes I'm single and yes I'm female. Lol. Just thought I'd clear that one up ;) Anyway, welcome to YWS and if you're ...

Kat We ran down the streets as fast as we could until we could run no more and then turned around to see... nothing. "I guess it went after some ...

I like this poem though your rhythm jumped around a lot and it could have had more description. The ending is very nice though and generally it's well written. Do ...

Again this is good and I haven't seen the film or book or whatever it's based on but it's interesting. I can see this being a sort of 'buffy the ...

I like this story. It's well written and you give the reader just enough pieces of information to keep them curious but not enough to bore them. Here are my ...