Rydia

You should probably finish work before you post it here. People prefer to read a polished poem and tear that to shreds rather than unravelling half finished drafts. Okay rant ...

Kat I didn't favour being out in the streets so Mike suggested we should look for another hotel; preferably one vacant of zombies. I had a better idea. "The church?" ...

Welcome to YWS, I'm sure you'll fit right in here. If you want any of your work critiqued or feel like a chat, feel free to pm me. No ones ...

Hey there and welcome to YWS. Don't worry if you're not so great at writing, I'm hopeless but I do it anyway. If you want a critique for any of ...

I like the first one though she's a little pale for that photo.

This is better but the stomach muscles need some work.

Hi there, the humour is good with me but so is the dark, emo stuff. Basically I read anything so if you're looking for a critique, feel free to pm ...

This piece needs some work. I think you should try and be more original, stick to the original idea but start again with the rest. Sorry if it sounds harsh ...

It's not the best piece and I'm not fond on the two line format but I like the idea and the symbolism of the violet lies close to my own ...

Really if you're cheating on these challenges then you can't count it as completing them but the drawing by itself is nice. She's a bit thin though and her neck ...

My sister and I wrote our last novel in a mixture of second and third person. We had certain sections which we called key points where we addressed the reader ...

Welcome Erin, it's nice to meet you. If you're feeling a little lost, want a critique on some of your work or just plain bored, feel free to pm me, ...

Some of the imagery in this piece is interesting but it needs to be stronger and you have so many lines that don't really add to the meaning of your ...

This ones better, you're certainly getting there. The imagery is better and you're still lacking punctuation but any improvement is better than none so keep improving!

Admittedly I'm not your average student but then who is? I didn't have the best of childhoods, in fact if I'm honest I was miserable at school but my friends ...