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Ah. I just commented on this one on the welcome board. I guess I'll move my comments here and then you might want to delete your other one as there ...

"I think so," Kitty replies. "Would you like one?"

It's a very good attempt. This structure is a great choice is you want to challenge yourself but it can be very restricting and rather repetitive if you're not careful. ...

Bonjour Ruth. Sorry, that's about all I know so your English is better than my French. In fact it's very good. Anyway, I'm sure you'll have a great time here ...

The first one really does look like that Horse is running away and the second is nice but not as good.

I quite like the one with the window.

Kat It didn't take us long to decide that the church wasn't such a great idea but then we hit on some luck, or as close to luck as we ...

I love these books! I'm on crossroads of twilight at the moment which is... Let me go look... Book 10. So who's favourite male character is Perrin? He's certainly mine, ...

Would people mind if I joined? Or do I have to read the original?

"Uh. Your dress is very pretty," Kitty replies awkwardly as she bites into a rather strange looking apple.

Just a few comments... Super Boy has chosen to follow in the foot steps of his father, stopping crime and hearing the cry of the innocent. I think footsteps is ...

Hey there and welcome to YWS. I have to agree that I'm not so into romance but I might just take a look... Heather xx

I really liked the surrender to the sunbeams one.

I don't usually answer so many questions but I sometimes do a rough draft. The thing is, my characters tend to develop as the story does and I'm good at ...

This one is really cute. Admittedly your rhyme an rhythm could have been better and it could have been longer but I like it and yes, snow is a wonderful ...