Rydia

You said ignore repitition and I'm nice so I'm going to resist the urge to...resisting... Okay. The poem covers an emotion I'll give you that but you have to reach ...

I don't know what to advise actually. Parts of this poem seem rather repetetive, especially 'go away' and you give the reader so little information. You have to try and ...

Lol. John Grisham isn't bad actually. Have you ever considered reading it? I've read two or three and they were quite interesting. There again I study law...

The Great Gatsby? Urgh. I had to study that recently and I have to say that I was glad when he got killed! My current favourite books are - 1. ...

My mum buys mine for me at birthdays and things. She likes to fuel my passion to read almost as much as I do! I happened on these by chance ...

Wow, love the Hornet and sorry for the repeat conversation. I'm rather new so I must have missed it...

Very nice... A John Grisham book. Oooh...

The effects are great and the quote is very sweet.

I like the bow and the one handed sword best. Very nice.

River Reunited with Grey and with the noble born DW added to our ranks, we hurried back to the underground city. Fortunately, the council were already in session, waiting to ...

River "They got a lead on me and followed me for a few days but I managed to lose them before I entered the underground city. With a bit of ...

River "For Grey? Yeah. When do we go?" "Tomorrow." "How many people we got?" "Four with you. Five if Amber comes." I nodded to myself and then turned away again. ...

Very coulourful and well drawn.

William Nicholson! That's his name! Lol. Don't ask, I was trying to think of it just yesterday and it wouldn't come to me. Anyway, welcome to YWS and I'm sure ...

Awww. That's a real sweet poem. Makes me think about my sister and I. No bond is stronger! This poem fulfills its' purpose just fine as it is.