Rydia

This seems interesting and I'm certainly curious. What is it the persona has done that's so bad is just one of the questions that's running through my head and making ...

River This time I was able to see a blurred image as Liskano raced from the room. "Just keep doing that and I'll find a way to follow you," I ...

Interview with the vampire is brilliant, both the film and the book are stunning.

Don't worry about it, we can cope without it for now.

A few suggestions... winters needs an apostrophe - winters' Open rather than opened perhaps? She lay still on the bed as her once golden hair caught the snowflakes as they ...

But you must, it's awesome!

7/10 It's not bad but I'm not such a huge fan on batman.

The flower is beautiful and the detail is equisite. Not a slight bit blurred. Well done.

Litvia Today I was sleeping in the crypt. That's right. Today. I hate trying to sleep with the sunlight slipping through gaps, reaching out to carress my face and draw ...

A little and it's rather repetitve. Also, writer is spelt wrong and so is friendless. Let me see... Do you want it to make sense? If you do, here are ...

Name= Litvia Timewood Age= 194 (appears to be 19) Race= Dark Elf Hair= Indigo black, waist length Eyes= Large and violet Complexion= Her skin is almost the shade of ivory ...

Co-written by my sister, Claire, and I. The Meaning of Life Life without meaning is like a bird without wings, That's what they say, but it's wrong. From a distance ...

I liked this poem and the rhythm was, as Claudette mentioned, rather subtle but it still worked. Actually I did notice the rhythm before you mentioned it but only because ...

I loved this one Jasmine. Your description was great and you wrote what you write best - negative love poetry. The rhythm of this piece is brilliant and the rhymes ...

Now that I look back at it, it makes sense but for some reason when I read it, I thought it was someone who had lost their family in a ...