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An interesting start. I'd have liked it to be longer and to introduce your main character more but I suppose that shall be done in the next part...

I like Ambrose a lot and I think you need to write another so that there isn't such a huge gap between this part and the other. The characters are ...

Very nice little story here and to be honest, I would have flipped that switch too so good for Dugger.

I loved this book. Not as good as 'The Pact' but full of great conflict and an unexpected ending. Book Review ‘My Sister’s Keeper’ by Jodi Picoult – Have you ...

Scroll down to read the latest version. Untitled Who wants to save a life? I do. Amongst dirty roads and dusty atmosphere, a woman exhales, inhales, deeper, slower, her blood ...

The rhythm of this is a little off in places and a few of your rhymes are forced but I love the theme of this poem and the ending is ...

My access will also be a little limited with my return to school but I'll try and post twice a week and in four weeks I break up for summer... ...

Welcome aboard shadow. We need anyone who's willing to post because I wont let this die!

River "In that case I believe we have a deal and by the thieves code shall that deal be made. Therefore by the thieves code shall all who break the ...

River "Well I say we give her a chance," I stated and Caden nodded reluctantly but I knew he intended to keep a close eye on her. "I know we ...

Aww, this one's very sad. It's well written, your spelling and grammar are accurate and the format compliments your subect. Basically I liked it though your imagery could have been ...

Katalyn 8:30 I awoke to the sound of screaming and sprang from my bed. Hurrying out of the room, I found Mike in the corridoor. "Was that Louis?" I gasped, ...

Lol. A rather ambitious character Whence. Let me see... Kat's motives are - 1. Stay alive. 2. Find other people to make a stand. 3. Find out if Louis can ...

Litvia The day advanced and one again I found myself awake. I sighed and decided to venture out anyway. I took up a cloak and wrapped it around my body, ...

Hola Lora! Hablo un poco Espanol pero estudio por solo un ano. Que te gusta el escribir? Lol. Sorry if that made no sense. My spanish is still rather limited ...