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What a cliche arguement but the pen is mightier for sure!

No problem. Me gusta mucho! Bien trabajo, Heather xx

How about a semi colon at the end of the second line and I'm not sure that disapearing is spelt right but I'm from England so spelling might vary for ...

I love artemis fowl so by more information, how much more? You want me to expand my list toa few hundred ;)

This was a little strange. First off, why does the guy get to go to heaven?!?!? I think that's a rather justified question given the context of the poem.Other than ...

Thank you very much! I don'tknow how you run a site like this so efficiently but well done all who helped fix the problem =) Oh and well done members ...

Hey there Linda! It's nice to meet you and welcome to YWS. I have a few questions if you don't mind... What do you like to write? What genre do ...

All characters in any literature book seek their happiness; they seek for something that would make them happy so they may leave all their troubles behind. However, it’s not their ...

I like the dark humour in this piece and I found it quite disturbing. That's a good thing mind. At first I liked the persona with his talk of heroic ...

Hi there. I liked this when you posted that first part on Necropolis and now that I've seen the whole story it's even better. Your characters are believable and there's ...

I think I'll give the site a browse. I've not read either of those but both are very good...

The Whale is quite good and oil pastels was a great choice of media. The self portrait is interesting too so far but the eyes could be more realistic.

Amelia "Land ahoy!" The lookout called and just a few minutes later we pulled into Antigua. "Well thank ye Captain. I'll be taking my leave now," I grinned, threw him ...

Hi Kate and Psychicninja. Welcome to YWS! If either of you want any of your work critiqued or are feeling lost, feel free to pm me, Heather xx

Where is everyone's characters at the moment? Only it would help me plan my next post. Amelia is a day or two away from Antigua.