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Re: Hello. I'm...
Hey there and welcome. A fan of food huh? What sort of food? I love Chinese, Indian, Italian, British... Lol. I love food.
Jun 15, 2007 -
Re: Whats your favourite book?
I'll answer the publishing question... Claire and me have one acceptance letter and two rejection letters and are currently deciding what to do but I think we're going to check ...
Jun 15, 2007 -
Re: Portfolios/Post Since Last Visit/Recent Lit Additions
I'm currently using it =)
Jun 15, 2007 -
Re: I can't get attached to my characters!
Yeah, just don't get too attached. I wasted a lot of time trying to avoid killing one of my characters in the last book but my sister insisted on it ...
Jun 15, 2007 -
Re: Chat room adventures
"Hello?" I called, "Is anyone there?" Just my luck. My memory of the past hours events is rather dim but not so long ago I was on a tour ship ...
Jun 15, 2007 -
Re: Dear 13-year-old: YOU SUCK!
Yeah, constructive criticism is always the best choice. It's best to not be too harsh and to point out the bad and the good and maturity has to be considered ...
Jun 15, 2007 -
Re: Fantasy RPG - The Virus
Thanks for joining you three =) Tigra "Okay then I'll look after them and you go search for a cure," I sighed when my twin sister objected to my idea. ...
Jun 15, 2007 -
Re: dirty wine
Some of the imagery in this piece is nice but I suggest that you use capitals after the fullstops unless you have a specific reason not to. Your punctuation and ...
Jun 15, 2007 -
Re: Necropolis
Katalyn 10:00 AM As the hours progressed and we sat in Louis' car, parked at the end of a quiet, empty street. We could see movement in some of the ...
Jun 15, 2007 -
Re: The Outlaws
River Give someone an idea and soon you'll wish you didn't. After my speech, I soon found myself surrounded by thieves eager to pledge themselves to 'my' mission. I also ...
Jun 15, 2007 -
Re: Jennafina's B-Day party
Did someone say cats are invited? Lol. Happy birthday Jenna, I hope you had a good time.
Jun 15, 2007 -
Re: Spill
Love the ending! Very humorous and an excellent contrast to the mature, complex vocabulary of the rest. I think the short, brief lines work really well for this and basically ...
Jun 15, 2007 -
Re: ....another.
Must agree that the repetition began to get a little... well repetitive. Other than that though it wasn't bad. The message was conveyed well and your imagery and vocabulary were ...
Jun 15, 2007 -
Re: Cliched Romance
Have to agree that this wasn't the best. I mean if a poem is supposed to be cliche then that's great but I expect to see a cliche poem. That ...
Jun 15, 2007 -
Re: Fire Alight
This didn't seem all that different from the last but then I suppose my memory of the first one has begun to fade.
Jun 14, 2007
