Rydia

A few specific points first - As the black specks grew larger began to hurry away from the area They fell straight and hard towards the Earth Their wings, however, ...

A few specific points first - Meg didn’t realize it's importance, but not too long after discussion on Act II as it related to the history and culture of Shakespeare’s ...

"That's a good question," The boy called Adam replies. "Care to answer it?" A girl named Alice retorts, tucking a stray piece of blond hair back into her bun. "Well ...

I'm a Pisces too! Awesome. Lol. Well it's nice to meet you Kite =)

What? How can you say that? I love her books. What about the pact? Salem falls? Vanishing Acts? They're all among my favourites! You're right, it's illegal to hate her ...

I like the idea of black. I need more stars :( but I suppose four in a month isn't bad.

I like this, just a few pointers... turn to darkness.I try and understand [A space between the full stop and I] I will be waiting with friends by my side. ...

Withdraw rather than withdrawl the hard times that I had to go through this change. that I had to go through to reach this change or that I had to ...

Yeah this is much better but Denouement has a good point - there are other characters to explore. That's up to you though and like I say, it's better now.

I shall answer that Alice. One of the main characters in charmed is called Paige Mathews but I guess it was just a huge coincidence. Personally I prefer Prue anyway ...

Okay, I liked this and first I have one specific comment to make before I get onto the general stuff - The red carpet was not straight and we were ...

Not going to mention the repetition seen as others dealt with that... oh dear. Too late. I mentioned it. Seriously though, that doesn't work. One or two lines repeated for ...

Lol. Oh yes, the second is much better. Hehe. I'm only joking, it wasn't that bad Adam and no poem deserves to be deleted and replaced by a few lines. ...

Is this better? Who wants to save a life? Amongst dirty roads and dusty atmosphere, a woman exhales, inhales, deeper, slower, her blood trails across her legs, the river runs ...

I found this quite interesting but perhaps a few flashbacks of the relationship would have helped. It's hard to feel pain for someone else if the reader can't experience that ...