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River I watched Caden leave and was tempted to follow but I'd never met a werewolf before and I was intrigued. "A drink would be nice, thanks," The werewolf grinned, ...

This was a bit unoriginal and I second that the persona needs a name. I want to knwo more about her thoughts, I want a meaning and plot beyind the ...

Hello there Candide. I suppose I shall have to resist from the urge to call you Candy but I must ask what you have against the nickname? I think it's ...

I think the first one is the best and I agree that the left eye is very well drawn.

Yeah, I'm afraid that's my fault. Well technically Ofour's on the other hand. You see, he got a place in my competition so I critiqued a few of his dramatic ...

"I like that idea," Nutty states. "Sounds good to me," Adds Adam. "I'm in," Roy adds. "Why not," Rick grins. "Then it's decided," Mattster decides, "And Alice would have totally ...

Oh yes. I watch them online these days and I've watched all of dragonball and 209 of the dragonball z series. After that I plan to move onto the movies ...

oooh, I love Northern Lights!

Lol. Yeah, you pretty much solved that problem but there may be a few vain people willing to pay and your work is very good.

A dragonball z fan I presume? Interesting... “Hey Vejeta hurry up!” shouted Jake , carrying his school bag on his shoulders as he ran[s] he ran [/s]to keep up with ...

Claudette picked up on the repetition and typo and other than that, I thought it was a good piece of writing. I liked the change in perspective and the fact ...

I like to write first and then type it up because I can use that as an editing stage so that the typed version is like the second draft but ...

Lol. You're going to wish you hadn't started offering portraits, everyone will want one! As for these, Sally is absolutely stunning and Wolf is gorgeous but I'm not so sure ...

Rather you than me pointing that out but I'm in complete agreeance. Other than that slight flaw though, she's well drawn and the colours are pretty.

It doesn't show up too well on my computer but it looks interesting =)